Another Revision

 I learned a lot this week through feedback and from revising my writing. 

Through articles, I learned how to give feedback and steps to use to rewrite my writing. I learned how to learn from feedback, The biggest tip is to always read your feedback to see the points others have pointed out that you haven't noticed yourself. There are multiple tips given for commenting on how to give feedback. There are ways to comment on content such as asking for detail, more information. what you could have included, relevance and importance? All of these can help me in the future to give reviews to others. These can be points to focus on when reading someone else's blog. 

Especially from others comments giving me feedback personally, there was a lot to learn from especially with their use of language and the pointers they used. One of the articles was about revision and different revision strategies that I looked into. I got a lot of good pointers from this. For my next pier review lesson, I will look into if the person has proper spelling and if they have proper referencing. The points that I learned will be used in the future.

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Making the most of feedback:  https://tudublin-my.sharepoint.com/:b:/g/personal/irene_mcginn_tudublin_ie/EQuE6TXaRmtDlAMIdH2916EBuUIj_zCT7Vg0P1mHzYujSw?e=jwDDGv         

Writing a paper revision:  https://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writingcenter/writingprocess/revising 

Academic Phrasebook:  https://www.phrasebank.manchester.ac.uk/