Peer Review #2

 This week I had to peer review two of my peer's blogs and leave a comment on each of the blog posts I had read. From reading and reviewing both of these blogs, I learned a lot.

From one of my peer's blogs, I realised that in my blogs I should flow easily from one topic to the other, making it easier to read my blogs and keeping the readers engaged. By doing this I can really keep readers engaged and be able to keep them reading my blog rather than just skimming over my blog. This can really help in the near future doing my blogs so people don't get bored of what they are reading. 

With this, I feel I could state my opinion on each topic/paragraph I speak about. By doing this it can make the reader understand what I'm talking about more and I can state examples in my topic to elaborate more on what I'm talking about. This can elaborate my topic more and can make it more detailed and understanding. By stating how I feel can let the reader know more about how I feel about what I'm talking about. It can also allow me to express my thoughts more which is what a blog is mostly meant to be about. 

My introduction should be more homely and welcoming like a blog should be but also explain what I am going to be further talking about throughout the blog. This is a very good point I noticed while reading my peer's blogs. With the opposite of introduction, I think I should have a short and sweet wrapped up conclusion towards the end of my blog to wrap it up. This can show the reader that I am finishing up my blog. 

From reading my peer's blogs I really learned a lot and this can help me with my blogs in the future.

- Kate O Toole

                                                             Source:

Megan (2021) Megans blog [online] available from https://megansidmblog.blogspot.com/2021/10/active-reading.html [accessed 17 Nov 2021].

Kailan (2021) Kailans's Blog CDM [online] available from https://kailanp.blogspot.com/2021/11/media-ethics.html [accessed 17 Nov 2021]